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vincentkreis
04-13-2013, 06:50 PM
This is a new scene that I start few days ago.
Every critics are welcome!!!
Thanks, Vincent.436

blitz
04-13-2013, 11:00 PM
Very nice composition. The only critique I have is that the polygons on the curtain should be increased.

vincentkreis
04-14-2013, 10:57 AM
Thanks Blitz for the comment!
I'll shake that!

vincentkreis
04-17-2013, 06:05 PM
Sorry for the delay but a lot of work to do and the inspiration is not really here... :)
So tell me about the ambiance!
Thanks, Vincent.
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Chevy
04-17-2013, 06:16 PM
I love the lamp material! Can you share it with us?

vincentkreis
04-18-2013, 02:42 PM
I'm not with my Desktop computer, so I'll share it later!
This One more new picture!

Vincent.

Chevy
04-18-2013, 04:22 PM
Looks great! I would say that there needs to be a hotter spot light effect on the table... as to how to achieve that, it will take some playing around.

vincentkreis
04-21-2013, 09:42 PM
I change some stuff in my scene, i'll start to show it tomorrow!
For information, I upload the textile on the lamp!

Vincent.

vincentkreis
04-22-2013, 12:38 PM
Hi everybody,
This the final render, some others will come after! (only one video card!)
The environnement is to make more marketable, but the project focused on the 2 lamps.
Proposals are welcome.

Thanks, Vincent.

david.randle
04-23-2013, 06:55 PM
Very cool and nicely designed lamps! Really nice work on the lampshade material... i know its a bit of a tough one to dial in as i've tried in the past.

My only comment would be to make sure that the glass material assigned to the red part of the chair is set to "solid". Right now it doesn't look like its solid so it looks really thin. making it "solid" will use the thickness of the geometry as the thickness of the glass.

Keep it up!

vincentkreis
04-24-2013, 08:07 PM
Thank you for the tips! Really nice!
I'd try the "solid" texture for the chair, and it's really better!
It's not the final render because the texture was not my favorite one!

Vincent.
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vincentkreis
05-02-2013, 01:27 PM
A new scene... with the same lamps!

Vincent.

leezhan
05-07-2013, 08:13 AM
Very nice composition. I like your masterpiece